Memorable Time in Office Space

I hate the sound of my own voice. When recorded it sounds particularly awful. However it is needed to guide the listener through my memory of being a small child in a large, adult space.

1.) Is this piece effective? If so then in what ways? If not then how? It's probably a bit of both.

2.) Overall what could make it more effective or understandable to strain a child in a work place?

3.) How is the editing? What can I do to make it better?

ANY CONSTRUCTIVE advice or criticism is welcomed.

Thank you for listening! Coming back soon.